By: Zachary Jove Caday
Hello every
one! Did you know that our school has a lot of extracurricular activities?!
Currently we have volley ball, running club during recess, and after
school golf. Participating in extracurricular activities can be very beneficial
to your health. It helps you keep a sound mind and keep you
physically fit. In addition to the activities mentioned before, we
also have track and field. Track and field is a very competitive
sport and it promotes friendly competition between participating
students. It is also one of those sports that is sure to get you
heart beating and keep you on the right track to being fit, which also
contributes to you feeling good and positive about yourself.
In track, you can participate in 3 activities which are
running, softball throw and long jump. Try outs are also open to
5th and 6th graders and still start during the end of year. More information on our upcoming volleball tournament coming soon!
Thank you Zachary for that great greeting, and I also liked how you explained more about track and field. I was looking forward to read more because your flow or rhythm from this sentence to this. Also when you started talking about track and field I didn't have to catch myself. Overall great job on this article and I look forward for more of your articles up here!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you greeted us with execitment. I also liked how you named what extracricular activiteys we had. I liked how you mentioned that we have after school golf because it isnt a know sport so know more people might sighn up. I liked how you told us all of the events for track. I also liked how you told us what grades compete. I cant wait to here about the vollyball tourniment.
ReplyDeleteGood job zach i say that was really nice and you better put up that update on volleyball because i want to know and you forgot that we will be having basketball tryouts i think in the middle of the year.One thing i liked about is you put hey so you can catch your audience because if you didnt then your audience will be yawning their heart out.Also i think you should interview some volleyball players on the team. from kawika (jordan aragon)
ReplyDeleteI liked it you did a great job! Lots of info and you named all of the activities. I didn't know there was even golf so i'm glad you mentioned it. What I do wish you could have done was explain what you do in library club and the other activities, overall, I liked it! I hope you can do another great blog soon!
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Thanks! Now I know all the fun sports I can do. I like how you informed us about all the sports we can do. Not just one. I like how you started with a execitment. I will read your next article! by Bryce Nichols
ReplyDeleteAwesome job Zach! I like how you mentioned the activities we have in school. Also i liked how you put in the track feild trip and the volleyball tournament. But you could have interveiwed some of the kids who are in one of the clubs you provided, the kids who was on track, and the kids who are in the volleyball team. But that is ok because you did give examples. Good job again it was really interesting!
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Fantastic blog Zachary! I eally liked how you really went into depth about track and field and how most extra curricular activities keep you fit. I also liked how you said that you are going to talk about the volleyball tournament next, and I can't wait to hear your thoughts on it. One thing that you could havre added though could have been the names of the other extra curricular activities like KIC and libray club. Overall, good job Zachary and keep up the good work! Christine was here =P.
ReplyDeleteThanks Zach!Now that you told us about the extra curricular activites that are at our school I would really want to join the Track Team. I liked how you even included our after school golf program because before not everyone used to know, but now they do. I'll be hoping to see the volleyball tournament soon because its almost coming up! Good job with this blog. Hope to see more to come.
ReplyDeleteZachary, I think you did an excellent job explaining the different activities that students at our school can participate in. Your writing is clear and organized. I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into your blog post and I'm very proud of you. I can't wait to read your future posts. Great job! - Ms. Correia
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